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书面表达:本周一是端午节,你校外教Tony对中国文化很感兴趣,你陪他去槐荫公园观看了龙舟比赛。
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 书面表达
本周一是端午节,你校外教Tony对中国文化很感兴趣,你陪他去槐荫公园观看了龙舟比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇日记。
写作要点:
1.现场情况。人多拥挤,16支龙舟队竞争激烈,人们欢呼,队员们闭队合作,最终“勇气队”获胜。
2.赛后活动:我给Tony介绍端午节,下午带他参加有关端午节的其它活动,如……
3.感想:Tony……,我……
写作要求:
1.短文内容必须包括所有要点、语句通顺,条理清晰;
2.省略号处须作适当发挥(1-2句即可);
3.100词左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
June 18th
Today is the Dragon Boat Festival.                                                    
【答案】Today is the Dragon Boat Festival For the reason that Tony has a strong interest in Chinese traditional culture. I invited him to come to watch the dragon boat races which was held in Huaiyin Park this morning When we arrived, it was crowded. There were 16 colorful dragon boats floating in the river. During the race, the dragon boat teams competed with each other, while people on each bank cheered up. Both Tony and I felt the exciting atmosphere. At last, the Courage Team won.
After the competition, I introduced the Dragon Boat Festival to Tony and welcomed him to many other activities about the festival. We went to learn how to make zongzi and admire a picture exhibition.
At the end of the day, tired as we were, we felt excited. Tony though our traditional Chinese culture was so amazing and I am proud of my great motherland.
【解析】
【详解】试题分析:本书面表达以“端午节”为话题的日记。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般过去时态,用第一人称来表达。注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用,使文意连接紧密,还要注意使用丰富的语句,注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。
写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练、要点齐全。文中invite sb.to do, during the race, compete with, cheere up, at last, both…and…; at the end of the day, be proud of等词汇的恰当使用,使上下文意连接紧密;本文还采用了丰富的句型,比如:运用了there be句型;定语从句、宾语从句、时间状语从句等复合句,大大增加了信息的容量,使文章增色不少,这是一篇不错的范文。
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